From 3ce377259cf59cac348b6c2b5e3be7285f6751f5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Jord Gui [SSW]" Date: Thu, 7 Dec 2023 12:16:58 +1100 Subject: [PATCH] =?UTF-8?q?=F0=9F=92=84=20Add=20examples=20for=20active=20?= =?UTF-8?q?language=20(#7466)?= MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit * Add bad and good examples for active language * Fix url to images --- rules/do-you-use-active-language-in-your-emails/rule.md | 8 ++++++++ 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+) diff --git a/rules/do-you-use-active-language-in-your-emails/rule.md b/rules/do-you-use-active-language-in-your-emails/rule.md index b1da5fe8824..9b41558c544 100644 --- a/rules/do-you-use-active-language-in-your-emails/rule.md +++ b/rules/do-you-use-active-language-in-your-emails/rule.md @@ -17,4 +17,12 @@ redirects: [] Try to use the active voice of a verb wherever possible. For instance, 'We will process your order today', sounds better than 'Your order will be processed today'. The first sounds more personal, whereas the latter, especially when used frequently, sounds unnecessarily formal. +::: bad +![Figure: Bad Example - using the passive voice](https://github.com/Jord-Gui/SSW.Rules.Content/assets/41951199/3e6dc030-3c4a-4f55-8380-90b63397d89f) +::: + +::: good +![Figure: Good Example - using the active voice](https://github.com/Jord-Gui/SSW.Rules.Content/assets/41951199/ed0d747e-a044-4d59-ac7b-a2414e7c6307) +::: +