From 0f5e2972921b4d2c30d931b0613305f7852cf4bb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Florian Rivoal Date: Thu, 25 Jul 2024 00:17:40 +0900 Subject: [PATCH] phrasing improvement Co-authored-by: Ted Thibodeau Jr --- index.bs | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/index.bs b/index.bs index 66210afe..7cf7f9aa 100644 --- a/index.bs +++ b/index.bs @@ -1746,8 +1746,8 @@ Charter Refinement * All issues filed against the [=charter draft=] must be [=formally addressed=], and their resolutions tracked in a disposition of comments. * [=Wide review=] of the [=charter draft=] is initiated and completed. - * Decisions are made as [=group decisions=] of all individuals participating in this process. - (However note that only W3C [=Members=] and the [=Team=] can particpate in a formal [[#Votes|vote]].) + * Decisions are made as [=group decisions=], where the group is made up of all individuals participating in this process, + (though only W3C [=Members=] and the [=Team=] can participate in any formal [[#Votes|vote]]). The [=charter refinement=] phase concludes when there is either: * A [=group decision=] to initiate [=AC Review=] of the [=charter draft=].