From 855f0626682ee8202daa688865d0ae98c498c8a9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: fmarino-ipzs <77629526+fmarino-ipzs@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Thu, 10 Oct 2024 14:43:50 +0200 Subject: [PATCH 1/4] fix: normative language --- docs/en/trust.rst | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/docs/en/trust.rst b/docs/en/trust.rst index 2ee1d9a0..8fbb5635 100644 --- a/docs/en/trust.rst +++ b/docs/en/trust.rst @@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ The Trust Anchor Entity Configuration, in addition of the common parameters list Entity Configuration Leaves and Intermediates ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ -In addition to the previously defined claims, the Entity Configuration of the Leaf and of the Intermediate Entities, MUST contain the parameters listed below: +In addition to the previously defined claims, the Entity Configuration of the Leaf and of the Intermediate Entities, MAY contain the parameters listed below: .. list-table:: From 06e83c65eef454ff71c7fd893ce2d5b9abedbf2b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: fmarino-ipzs <77629526+fmarino-ipzs@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Thu, 10 Oct 2024 14:50:16 +0200 Subject: [PATCH 2/4] chore: typos --- docs/en/defined-terms.rst | 2 +- docs/en/ssi-introduction.rst | 4 ++-- 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/en/defined-terms.rst b/docs/en/defined-terms.rst index 4e88aaaf..dc086506 100644 --- a/docs/en/defined-terms.rst +++ b/docs/en/defined-terms.rst @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ Below are the description of acronyms and definitions which are useful for furth - A characteristic, quality, right or permission of a natural or legal person or of an object. [ARF v1.4] - Other alternative terms: User Claim * - Digital Identity Provider - - Entity responsible for identifying citizens for the issuance of an digital identity. + - Entity responsible for identifying citizens for the issuance of a digital identity. - * - Digital Credential - A signed set of Attributes encapsulated in a specific data format, such as mdoc format specified in [ISO 18013-5] or the SD-JWT VC format specified in [SD-JWT-VC]. This may be a Personal Identification Data (PID), (Qualified) Electronic Attestation of Attribute ((Q)EAA). [Revised from ARF v1.4] diff --git a/docs/en/ssi-introduction.rst b/docs/en/ssi-introduction.rst index 9e009f38..bceaff26 100644 --- a/docs/en/ssi-introduction.rst +++ b/docs/en/ssi-introduction.rst @@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ Users possess their digital documents and determine to which actors they present The main difference between this new approach and the traditional IAM infrastructure is that during the presentation phase there are no intermediaries between the Wallet and the Relying Party, while in the SAML2 or OIDC based infrastructure an Identity Provider is always involved, knowing which services a citizen is accessing to. -SSI is also significant in the field of data exchange and data governance. This is relevant at both national and European levels, including the new eIDAS Regulation. In fact, it envisions a login option designed for European Users - be they citizens, public administrations, or companies - who want to access another Member State's services using their national authentication systems. +Self-Sovereign Identity (SSI) is also significant in the field of data exchange and data governance. This is relevant at both national and European levels, including the new eIDAS Regulation. In fact, it envisions a login option designed for European Users - be they citizens, public administrations, or companies - who want to access another Member State's services using their national authentication systems. -The main roles in an Wallet ecosystem are are listed as follow: +The main roles in a Wallet ecosystem are are listed as follow: - Issuers: parties who can issue digital credentials about a person; - Verifiers: parties who request Holders' digital credentials for authentication and authorization purposes; From 04f059d635653255172ad1453784efd94322069b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: fmarino-ipzs <77629526+fmarino-ipzs@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 15 Oct 2024 14:48:24 +0200 Subject: [PATCH 3/4] Apply suggestions from code review Co-authored-by: Giuseppe De Marco --- docs/en/ssi-introduction.rst | 2 +- docs/en/trust.rst | 2 +- 2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/en/ssi-introduction.rst b/docs/en/ssi-introduction.rst index bceaff26..093139f1 100644 --- a/docs/en/ssi-introduction.rst +++ b/docs/en/ssi-introduction.rst @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Users possess their digital documents and determine to which actors they present The main difference between this new approach and the traditional IAM infrastructure is that during the presentation phase there are no intermediaries between the Wallet and the Relying Party, while in the SAML2 or OIDC based infrastructure an Identity Provider is always involved, knowing which services a citizen is accessing to. -Self-Sovereign Identity (SSI) is also significant in the field of data exchange and data governance. This is relevant at both national and European levels, including the new eIDAS Regulation. In fact, it envisions a login option designed for European Users - be they citizens, public administrations, or companies - who want to access another Member State's services using their national authentication systems. +Digital identity Wallet Architectures are significant in the field of data exchange and data governance. In accordance with the eIDAS Regulation, a new digital identity paradigm is designed for European Users - be they citizens, public administrations, or companies - who want to access another Member State's services using their national authentication systems. The main roles in a Wallet ecosystem are are listed as follow: diff --git a/docs/en/trust.rst b/docs/en/trust.rst index 8fbb5635..b97eeb09 100644 --- a/docs/en/trust.rst +++ b/docs/en/trust.rst @@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ The Trust Anchor Entity Configuration, in addition of the common parameters list Entity Configuration Leaves and Intermediates ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ -In addition to the previously defined claims, the Entity Configuration of the Leaf and of the Intermediate Entities, MAY contain the parameters listed below: +In addition to the previously defined claims, the Entity Configuration of the Leaves and of the Intermediate Entities use the following parameters: .. list-table:: From 6515080dfe9bb1d0f5b8f4f63cd74cf5c2ac52fc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: fmarino-ipzs <77629526+fmarino-ipzs@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 15 Oct 2024 14:50:59 +0200 Subject: [PATCH 4/4] Update trust.rst --- docs/en/trust.rst | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/en/trust.rst b/docs/en/trust.rst index b97eeb09..e7107a77 100644 --- a/docs/en/trust.rst +++ b/docs/en/trust.rst @@ -332,7 +332,7 @@ The Entity Configurations of all the participants in the federation MUST have in Entity Configuration Trust Anchor ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ -The Trust Anchor Entity Configuration, in addition of the common parameters listed above, MAY contain the following parameters: +The Trust Anchor Entity Configuration, in addition to the common parameters listed above, uses the following parameters: .. list-table:: :widths: 20 60 20 @@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ The Trust Anchor Entity Configuration, in addition of the common parameters list Entity Configuration Leaves and Intermediates ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ -In addition to the previously defined claims, the Entity Configuration of the Leaves and of the Intermediate Entities use the following parameters: +In addition to the previously defined claims, the Entity Configuration of the Leaves and of the Intermediate Entities uses the following parameters: .. list-table::