From 21df396efceefeb68c0509d3866cc5972c521feb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: trurlurl <82838870+trurlurl@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 11 Mar 2024 11:01:04 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Apply suggestions from code review - only annotations
---
.../functions/deckPlans/DeckPlans-Example.xml | 16 ++++++++--------
.../netex_responsibilitySet_version.xsd | 4 ++--
.../netex_deckPlan_version.xsd | 10 +++++-----
.../netex_environment_version.xsd | 4 ++--
.../netex_vehicleType_version.xsd | 2 +-
.../netex_ifopt_equipmentAccess_support.xsd | 2 +-
.../netex_ifopt_navigationPath_version.xsd | 2 +-
.../part1_ifopt/netex_ifopt_site_support.xsd | 2 +-
.../netex_servicePattern_version.xsd | 2 +-
.../netex_datedVehicleJourney_version.xsd | 2 +-
10 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)
diff --git a/examples/functions/deckPlans/DeckPlans-Example.xml b/examples/functions/deckPlans/DeckPlans-Example.xml
index aef8e6793..8cf062c18 100644
--- a/examples/functions/deckPlans/DeckPlans-Example.xml
+++ b/examples/functions/deckPlans/DeckPlans-Example.xml
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@
true
- cashAndCard contactlessPaymentCard travelCard
+ cashAndCard contactlessPaymentCard travelCard
1.00
@@ -872,7 +872,7 @@
0.80
2.00
- ENtrance to top of stairs
+ Entrance to top of stairs
internal
@@ -1621,7 +1621,7 @@
- Basic Elements for map of bus
+ Basic Elements for map of a bus
http:erebus.eu/plans/double_decker_floor_plan
@@ -1637,7 +1637,7 @@
- Stairs
+ Stairs
@@ -1649,11 +1649,11 @@
- Deck Plan Assignment Example
- This is an example showing how one might assign a Deck Entrance to a journey so as to state which entrance will be at which point on teh platform . More sense for a train of ferry .
+ Deck Plan Assignment Example
+ This is an example showing how one might assign a Deck Entrance to a journey to state which entrance will be at which boarding position on the platform. Most relevant for a train or a ferry.
- To a particalr stopt
+ To a particular stop.
@@ -1676,7 +1676,7 @@
true
1
- exit at rear
+ Exit at rear
diff --git a/xsd/netex_framework/netex_responsibility/netex_responsibilitySet_version.xsd b/xsd/netex_framework/netex_responsibility/netex_responsibilitySet_version.xsd
index 92249ed64..0e24ad292 100644
--- a/xsd/netex_framework/netex_responsibility/netex_responsibilitySet_version.xsd
+++ b/xsd/netex_framework/netex_responsibility/netex_responsibilitySet_version.xsd
@@ -437,7 +437,7 @@ Rail transport, Roads and Road transport
- Legal jurisdictin coverbimg the contract
+ Legal jurisdiction covering the contract.
@@ -452,7 +452,7 @@ Rail transport, Roads and Road transport
- The contractor is that party that provides agreed services or goods to the Contractee according to the conditions in a Contract.
+ The contractor is that party that provides agreed services or goods to the contractee according to the conditions in a contract.
diff --git a/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_deckPlan_version.xsd b/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_deckPlan_version.xsd
index 88288caa9..0eff15ae9 100644
--- a/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_deckPlan_version.xsd
+++ b/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_deckPlan_version.xsd
@@ -449,8 +449,8 @@
- A specialisation of DECK SPACE defining an area within a VEHICLE (i.e. bus, boat, coach, car) or TRAIN ELEMENT for use by passengers. _2.0
-+v2.0
+ A specialisation of DECK SPACE defining an area within a VEHICLE (i.e. bus, boat, coach, car) or TRAIN ELEMENT for use by passengers. +v2.0
+
@@ -719,7 +719,7 @@
- Positional sequence of door from front (orr left side end) of VEHICLE. 1 - forward,
+ Positional sequence of door from front to end (or left side to right) of VEHICLE. Start with 1.
@@ -731,7 +731,7 @@
- EClassification lements for a DECK ENTRANCE.
+ Classification elements for a DECK ENTRANCE.
@@ -1199,7 +1199,7 @@
- Height ofindow from floor of of DECK.
+ Height of window from floor of of DECK.
diff --git a/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_environment_version.xsd b/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_environment_version.xsd
index d0d9f33d3..7675aeab0 100644
--- a/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_environment_version.xsd
+++ b/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_environment_version.xsd
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ Rail transport, Roads and Road transport
Standard
- Shared PATH features Model.
+ Shared PATH features model.
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ Rail transport, Roads and Road transport
- Elements of a NAVIGATION PATH.
+ Elements of an ACCESS SUMMARY.
diff --git a/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_vehicleType_version.xsd b/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_vehicleType_version.xsd
index 12ca01b27..c1e1c665c 100644
--- a/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_vehicleType_version.xsd
+++ b/xsd/netex_framework/netex_reusableComponents/netex_vehicleType_version.xsd
@@ -1090,7 +1090,7 @@ Rail transport, Roads and Road transport
- Range when full fueeled /charged +v2.0.
+ Range when full fuelled /charged. +v2.0
diff --git a/xsd/netex_part_1/part1_ifopt/netex_ifopt_equipmentAccess_support.xsd b/xsd/netex_part_1/part1_ifopt/netex_ifopt_equipmentAccess_support.xsd
index cbb9ea0ba..0b77e70bc 100644
--- a/xsd/netex_part_1/part1_ifopt/netex_ifopt_equipmentAccess_support.xsd
+++ b/xsd/netex_part_1/part1_ifopt/netex_ifopt_equipmentAccess_support.xsd
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ Rail transport, Roads and Road transport
- Drop dwon shutter - eg fopr passenger vehicle or luggage wagon.
+ Drop down shutter - e.g. for passenger vehicle or luggage wagon.
diff --git a/xsd/netex_part_1/part1_ifopt/netex_ifopt_navigationPath_version.xsd b/xsd/netex_part_1/part1_ifopt/netex_ifopt_navigationPath_version.xsd
index 99c87308f..b14212fdd 100644
--- a/xsd/netex_part_1/part1_ifopt/netex_ifopt_navigationPath_version.xsd
+++ b/xsd/netex_part_1/part1_ifopt/netex_ifopt_navigationPath_version.xsd
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ Rail transport, Roads and Road transport
- A designated path between two PLACEs. May include an Ordered sequence of references to PATH LINKS.
+ A designated path between two PLACEs. May include an ordered sequence of references to PATH LINKS.
diff --git a/xsd/netex_part_1/part1_ifopt/netex_ifopt_site_support.xsd b/xsd/netex_part_1/part1_ifopt/netex_ifopt_site_support.xsd
index b85c30320..251fc833d 100644
--- a/xsd/netex_part_1/part1_ifopt/netex_ifopt_site_support.xsd
+++ b/xsd/netex_part_1/part1_ifopt/netex_ifopt_site_support.xsd
@@ -369,7 +369,7 @@ Rail transport, Roads and Road transport
- Allowed values for doors status.
+ Allowed values for ENTRANCE type.
diff --git a/xsd/netex_part_1/part1_tacticalPlanning/netex_servicePattern_version.xsd b/xsd/netex_part_1/part1_tacticalPlanning/netex_servicePattern_version.xsd
index ce5f23dad..c6302e029 100644
--- a/xsd/netex_part_1/part1_tacticalPlanning/netex_servicePattern_version.xsd
+++ b/xsd/netex_part_1/part1_tacticalPlanning/netex_servicePattern_version.xsd
@@ -889,7 +889,7 @@ Rail transport, Roads and Road transport
- Advertisement Elements for info about publicising STOP POINT IN JOURNEY PATTERN. +V1.1
+ Advertisement elements for publicising STOP POINT IN JOURNEY PATTERN. +V1.1
diff --git a/xsd/netex_part_2/part2_journeyTimes/netex_datedVehicleJourney_version.xsd b/xsd/netex_part_2/part2_journeyTimes/netex_datedVehicleJourney_version.xsd
index 74d7d775b..f7b913921 100644
--- a/xsd/netex_part_2/part2_journeyTimes/netex_datedVehicleJourney_version.xsd
+++ b/xsd/netex_part_2/part2_journeyTimes/netex_datedVehicleJourney_version.xsd
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ Rail transport, Roads and Road transport
- Vehicle Preassignments for JOURNEY.
+ Vehicle preassignments for JOURNEY.