From e5f62a4a422bcbcb60b2b8a3419885308a7b9de9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Florian Rivoal <git@florian.rivoal.net>
Date: Thu, 23 Jan 2025 22:11:10 +0900
Subject: [PATCH] Improve phrasing

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 index.bs | 9 ++++++---
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.bs b/index.bs
index d82b34cf..23ad27f8 100644
--- a/index.bs
+++ b/index.bs
@@ -4721,9 +4721,12 @@ Registry Definitions</h4>
 <h4 id=reg-pub>
 Publishing Registries</h4>
 
-	[=Registries=] can be published by [=chartered group|chartered=] or [=elected groups=] either
-	as a stand-alone [=technical report=] on the [=Registry Track=] called a <dfn>registry report</dfn>,
-	or, in the case of [=Working Groups=], incorporated as part of a [=Recommendation=] as an <dfn oldids="registry-section">embedded registry</dfn>.
+	A [=chartered group|chartered=] or [=elected group=] can publish a [=registry=]
+	as a stand-alone [=technical report=] on the [=Registry Track=],
+	where it is called a <dfn>registry report</dfn>.
+	[=Working Groups=] have the additional option of
+	incorporating a [=registry=] as part of a [=Recommendation=],
+	as an <dfn oldids="registry-section">embedded registry</dfn>.
 
 	The [=registry report=] or [=embedded registry=] <em class=rfc2119>must</em>:
 	<ul>