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better copywriting for start message #2

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sayanee opened this issue Jun 22, 2016 · 9 comments
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better copywriting for start message #2

sayanee opened this issue Jun 22, 2016 · 9 comments
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sayanee commented Jun 22, 2016

Hello! Thanks for connecting with us via Messenger. Ask us about "upcoming events"

Edit to include:

  • what are upcoming events?
  • what is We Build SG?

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kahwee commented Jun 22, 2016

Most apps start with a tutorial of sorts. I think we can start with a better marketing blurb. Is there a one-sentence introduction to We Build SG?

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sayanee commented Jun 22, 2016

Is there a one-sentence introduction to We Build SG

exactly that I'm thinking! 👏

How about...

Hello! We Build SG curates the grassroots engineering, design and maker community in Singapore. Ask us about "upcoming events" or "updated repos".

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kahwee commented Jun 22, 2016

I would lose the "the" and make "community" plural.

Hello! We Build SG curates grassroots engineering, design and maker communities in Singapore. Ask us about "upcoming events" or "updated repos".

What do you think?

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sayanee commented Jun 22, 2016

🚢 :shipit: 🌟

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sayanee commented Jul 9, 2016

Where can we change these copywriting? Doesn't seem to be in the code. Can't find in the chat bot config / setting either 😰

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kahwee commented Jul 10, 2016

I'll change this. It's not exposed in Facebook's Settings yet, it's a POST request for their API server.

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sayanee commented Jul 11, 2016

Uh is the code at https://kw.sg/webuild/bot doing the POST request? You can open source the code as well, then anyone can help to change it - will be faster for you 😄 👌

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kahwee commented Jul 13, 2016

The code is actually in this repository. There's no additional code hosted by the server.

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kahwee commented Jul 13, 2016

There's a bit of problem with Facebook's API at the moment. It's updated but not reflected in new threads.

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