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champions/pre-cohort-engage.qmd

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 ## Program overview
 
-**This is a professional development and leadership opportunity for NOAA research groups to explore open data science practices.**
+**This is a professional development and leadership opportunity for Fred Hutch research groups to explore open data science practices and strengthen collaboration and reproducibility.**
 
-[**Openscapes**](https://openscapes.org) is an approach for doing better science in less time\[\^1\]. We help research groups reimagine data analysis, develop modern skills that are of immediate value to them, and cultivate collaborative and inclusive research communities. Openscapes' mentorship and community engagement approaches center on open data science as kinder science\[\^2\], enabling increased efficiency and resilience for teams so that their work has more enduring impact.
+[**Openscapes**](https://openscapes.org) is an approach and a movement that helps researchers and those supporting research find each other and feel empowered to conduct data-intensive science [^1],[^2]. We mentor research groups reimagine data analysis, develop modern skills that are of immediate value to them, and cultivate collaborative and inclusive research communities. Openscapes' mentorship and community engagement approaches center on open data science as kinder science[^3], enabling increased efficiency and resilience for teams so that their work has more enduring impact.
 
 [**Openscapes Champions**](https://www.openscapes.org/champions/) is a remote-by-design mentorship program for environmental and Earth science research teams to explore open data science practices. Participants attend as a team with their research group in a cohort with other teams, together learning how to reframe data-intensive science as a collaborative effort. By discussing open software tooling and communities enabling reproducible research (e.g. R/Python, GitHub, metadata, cloud), participants develop collaborative skills, mindsets, and habits and establish shared practices for increased efficiency in their own research, while contributing to a more inclusive scientific culture.
 
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 Nominate your team by filling out this [Google Form](https://forms.gle/ukhkoMzLXGdQXqtg7) by August 20, 2021. This opportunity is open only to those affiliated with NOAA NMFS. Please submit one nomination per team, preferably by the team lead (PI, project lead, etc). We will confirm participation by late August 2021.
 
-Learn more about the [Openscapes Champions Program](https://openscapes.org/champions), [stories from previous cohorts](https://openscapes.org/cohorts)\], and [FAQs about forming your team](https://openscapes.org/faq). Questions? Contact Openscapes: openscapes at nceas.ucsb.edu
+Learn more about the [Openscapes Champions Program](https://openscapes.org/champions), [stories from previous cohorts](https://openscapes.org/cohorts)\], and [FAQs about forming your team](https://openscapes.org/faq). Questions? Contact Openscapes: hello at openscapes
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+\[\^1\]:
+ \[Lowndes et al. 2019: Supercharge your research\](https://openscapes.github.io/supercharge-research/)
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+\[\^2\]:
+ \[Robinson & Lowndes 2022: The Openscapes Flywheel\](https://eartharxiv.org/repository/view/4560/)
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+ \[Lowndes 2019: Open software means kinder science\](https://blogs.scientificamerican.com/observations/open-software-means-kinder-science)
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+[^1]: [Lowndes et al. 2019: Supercharge your research](https://openscapes.github.io/supercharge-research/)
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+[^2]: [Robinson & Lowndes 2022: The Openscapes Flywheel](https://eartharxiv.org/repository/view/4560/)
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+[^3]: [Lowndes 2019: Open software means kinder science](https://blogs.scientificamerican.com/observations/open-software-means-kinder-science)
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 ### Google form
 
 Potential participants can sign up via Google Form (or Google Sheet - see below).
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 These are short intro calls with Openscapes and team leads or teams, to start getting to know each other, share more details about the Champions Program, learn about the team, how they work, their goals for the Cohort, and answer any questions. This is a way for us to get to know each other and to learn more about their team's needs.
 
-We use Google Calendar Appointment Slots or the new Appointment Schedule to schedule these 1:1's \~1 month before the start of the cohort. ([Learn about appointment slots vs (new) schedules](https://support.google.com/calendar/answer/11608416). Note in early access preview of schedules, you can\'t add additional team members to your appointment schedule so that they\'re automatically added to booked appointments - must do that manually.) Create \~2 half-day blocks and invite team leads to book and invite their team members.
+We use Google Calendar Appointment Slots or the new Appointment Schedule to schedule these 1:1's \~1 month before the start of the cohort. ([Learn about appointment slots vs (new) schedules](https://support.google.com/calendar/answer/11608416). Note in early access preview of schedules, you can't add additional team members to your appointment schedule so that they're automatically added to booked appointments - must do that manually.) Create \~2 half-day blocks and invite team leads to book and invite their team members.
 
 Example text in the Calendar Appointment Slots: