Update _newsletters/2024-11-01-newsletter.md

Co-authored-by: Neil Shephard <[email protected]>

_newsletters/2024-11-01-newsletter.md

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 The programme will be running over the next few months, check out for [more information](https://rse.shef.ac.uk/training/fair4rs/) or to [sign up](https://rse.shef.ac.uk/training/fair4rs/) for sessions!
 
-In the first session which took place in October, our Head of Research Software Engineering, Romain Thomas, delivered a talk titled "Better software for Better research: Introduction to the FAIR2 for Research Software training programme". In this introductory talk we present what the FAIR principles are and why they are crucial to make your research more open. We give some initial hints on how to apply them to software and present the FAIR training programme that our teams have designed for the UoS research community.
+In the first session which took place in October, our Head of Research Software Engineering, Romain Thomas, delivered a talk titled "Better software for Better research: Introduction to the FAIR2 for Research Software training programme". In this introductory talk he presented what the FAIR principles are and why they are crucial to make your research more open. We gave some initial hints on how to apply them to software and present the FAIR training programme that our teams have designed for the UoS research community.
 
 The [recording](https://orda.shef.ac.uk/articles/media/Better_software_for_Better_research_Introduction_to_the_FAIR2_for_Research_Software_training_programme/27283239?file=49937889) of the talk and the [slides](https://fair2-for-research-software.github.io/Better_software_for_better_research/#/title-slide) are both available.