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@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ Finding returning work or even new client work can be difficult at the best of t
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 Maintaining your connections is primarily about keeping yourself at the front of someone's mind. This way if they have a problem, they think of you!
-This becomes much easier when you [use Personalized Invites](/linkedin-connect-with-people) help you remember who they are.
+This becomes much easier when you [use personalized invites](/linkedin-connect-with-people) to help you both remember each other.
 
 ## Reaching out to someone you knew well
 
@@ -27,10 +27,10 @@ Imagine you're wanting to reach out to a previous client or acquaintance.
 ::: greybox
 Hi Bob 👋,
 
-I've heard that you're interested in Tina CMS. Our team has extensive experience in implementing Tina CMS for various clients, and we'd love to help you too. How about we organize a meeting with our account manager this week to discuss the details? 😃
+I've heard that you're interested in Tina CMS. Our team has extensive experience in implementing TinaCMS for various clients, and we'd love to help you too. How about we organize a meeting with our account manager this week to discuss the details? 😃
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 ::: bad
-Bad example: Don't be too salesy! How would you respond to this?
+Bad example - Don't be too salesy! How would you respond to this?
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 ::: greybox
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ My team and I have recently moved over to TinaCMS, and it's been an awesome expe
 What prompted you to look into a change? 😃
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 ::: good
-Good Example: You've shown interest, but not asking for work.
+Good example - You've shown interest, but not asking for work
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 ## Reaching out to an old Connection
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ I see that you're working at company using .NET Framework 4.7.2. Wow, that's old
 If you'd like, I can put you in touch with my Account Manager for an initial meeting to upgrade to .NET 8?
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 ::: bad
-Bad example: Too salesy, and a bit rude?
+Bad example - Too salesy, and a bit rude?
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 ::: greybox
@@ -73,5 +73,5 @@ I saw that we're alumni from the same university, and that you're working at Atl
 How are you enjoying working on that cool tech?
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 ::: good
-Good Example: You're re-introducing yourself and kicking off a conversation
+Good example - You're re-introducing yourself and kicking off a conversation
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