Update to standardized descriptions.

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diff --git a/xml/MAIN-SLES4SAP-guide.xml b/xml/MAIN-SLES4SAP-guide.xml
@@ -15,10 +15,10 @@
   <productnumber>&productnumber;</productnumber>
   <meta name="title" condition="quick" its:translate="yes">Installation Quick Start</meta>
   <meta name="title" condition="noquick" its:translate="yes">Guide</meta>
-  <meta name="description" condition="quick" its:translate="yes">This document guides you through the installation of &productnameshort;.</meta>
-  <meta name="description" condition="noquick" its:translate="yes">This document provides detailed information about how to install and customize &productnameshort;.</meta>
-  <meta name="social-descr" condition="quick" its:translate="yes">A quick introduction to &productnameshort; installation.</meta>
-  <meta name="social-descr" condition="noquick" its:translate="yes">&productnameshort; installation and customization.</meta>
+  <meta name="description" condition="quick" its:translate="yes">How to install &productname;</meta>
+  <meta name="description" condition="noquick" its:translate="yes">How to install and customize &productname;</meta>
+  <meta name="social-descr" condition="quick" its:translate="yes">Install &productnameshort;</meta>
+  <meta name="social-descr" condition="noquick" its:translate="yes">Install and customize &productnameshort;</meta>
   <date><?dbtimestamp format="B d, Y"?></date>
   <revhistory xml:id="rh-book-s4s">
     <revision>

diff --git a/xml/article_sap_automation.xml b/xml/article_sap_automation.xml
@@ -24,8 +24,8 @@ https://confluence.suse.com/x/8IEnGw
     <productname role="abbrev">&productnameshort;</productname>
     <productnumber>&productnumber;</productnumber>
     <meta name="title" its:translate="yes">&sap; Automation</meta>
-    <meta name="description" its:translate="yes">An introduction to automated solutions for &sap; administrators to efficiently configure &ha; and &sap; systems.</meta>
-    <meta name="social-descr" its:translate="yes">Automated solutions for &sap; administrators.</meta>
+    <meta name="description" its:translate="yes">How to use automation to efficiently configure &ha; and &sap; systems</meta>
+    <meta name="social-descr" its:translate="yes">Use automation for HA and &sap; system setup</meta>
     <date><?dbtimestamp format="B d, Y"?></date>
     <revhistory xml:id="rh-article-sap-automation">
       <revision>
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ https://confluence.suse.com/x/8IEnGw
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Cloud Service Provides (Azure, AWS, and GCP) automated adjustments for each provider 
+          Cloud Service Provides (Azure, AWS, and GCP) automated adjustments for each provider
           as best-practice.
         </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -399,7 +399,7 @@ https://confluence.suse.com/x/8IEnGw
     <title>High available NFS storage</title>
     <para>
       Use the &salt; formulas <package>drbd-formula</package> and
-      <package>habootstrap-formula</package> to create a highly available NFS storage cluster. 
+      <package>habootstrap-formula</package> to create a highly available NFS storage cluster.
     </para>
     <para>
       Use the formula <package>drbd-formula</package> for setting up and managing

diff --git a/xml/article_sap_monitoring.xml b/xml/article_sap_monitoring.xml
@@ -23,8 +23,8 @@ https://suse.com/c/coming-soon-sap-landscape-monitoring-on-sles-for-sap/
   <productname role="abbrev">&productnameshort;</productname>
   <productnumber>&productnumber;</productnumber>
   <meta name="title" its:translate="yes">&sap; Monitoring</meta>
-  <meta name="description" its:translate="yes">An introduction to monitoring solutions for &sap; administrators to efficiently monitor their &sap; systems.</meta>
-  <meta name="social-descr" its:translate="yes">Monitoring solutions for &sap; administrators.</meta>
+  <meta name="description" its:translate="yes">How to use monitoring solutions to check on &sap; systems</meta>
+  <meta name="social-descr" its:translate="yes">Use monitoring solutions to check on &sap; systems</meta>
   <date><?dbtimestamp format="B d, Y"?></date>
   <revhistory xml:id="rh-article-sap-monitoring">
     <revision>
@@ -542,7 +542,7 @@ GRANT HANADB_EXPORTER_ROLE TO HANADB_EXPORTER_USER;
     <sect2 xml:id="running-as-a-daemon">
       <title>Running as a service</title>
       <para>
-        To run the hanadb_exporter as 
+        To run the hanadb_exporter as
         <literal>systemd</literal> service, install the exporter using the RPM
         package as described in
         <xref linkend="sec-sol-monit-hana-db-install"/>.