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Update/Expand What Section of README.md issue #9 #13

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This Pull Request Addresses the question raised by @Cleop in issue #9 💭

I feel these docs are more readable now.
@iteles Please review and give feedback if possible.

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nelsonic commented Nov 9, 2019

@iteles if/when you have time, please review and give any feedback. Thanks. 📥

…on/answer to end of README.md as it breaks the flow #9
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And finally for the _third_ step, ***Complete***,
we will build a simple checklist system.
See: [`checklists.md`](https://github.com/dwyl/product-roadmap/blob/master/checklists.md)
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I've noticed a few typos on the checklist document, I'll create a new PR to fix them.

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@SimonLab yes, please do fix when you have time. thanks. 👍

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### USP: What is _different_ about the @dwyl App?
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Sub title not displayed correctly. Looking why it's broken.

Also the USP meaning wasn't obvious to me and had too google it. We can write it down fully (Unique Selling Point/Proposition) or link it to the wikipedia page: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Unique_selling_proposition

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@SimonLab please edit it to help clarify it for others. thanks. 👍

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Sorry just saw the link to the Wikipedia page just under.

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As you've seen ⬆️ I've added a few suggestions to fix some typos.

I'm not sure yet about the USP title yet but hopefully it will be displayed properly.
The other thing I've noticed is the link to the "work hard every waking hour" youtube video is not working anymore:
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We can either remove the link or try to find a new link to the video.

Otherwise looks good 👍

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@SimonLab thanks for taking the time to review this PR in such great detail and propose changes. 👍
Lame that the video link is broken ... 😞
Alternative link to Elon Musk "work hard every waking hour": https://youtu.be/liJbB_0eCTo?t=25 📺

I'm a fan of Elon's work ethic and feel that it will inspire/motivate others in our community,
so I'm keen to keep the reference. I'm really not a fan of people who do the bare minimum work and think it's important to set expectations. Note: Not saying that everyone needs to work 80-100 hours per week like Elon. People should decide for themselves what they want in life. If they want "balance" in their 20's more than early retirement in their 30's that's their decision. Nothing "wrong" with it. 👍

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Looks great, @iteles I'll let you check one last time if you want and merge the PR?

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iteles commented Nov 11, 2019

👍 Thanks both!

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