improve phrasing

Co-authored-by: Ted Thibodeau Jr <[email protected]>

index.bs

@@ -2845,15 +2845,15 @@ Advisory Committee Override</h3>
 	The level of support needed for a [=Advisory Committee Override=] to pass
 	depends on the level of participation by [=Advisory Committee Representatives=],
 	(including those who cast an explicit “abstain” ballot):
-	* if no more than 15%,
-		the vote passes
-		if the number of “Approve” ballots exceeds three times the number of “Reject” ballots.
-	* if more than 15% but less than 20%,
-		the vote passes
-		if the number of “Approve” ballots exceeds twice the number of “Reject” ballots.
-	* if 20% or more,
-		the vote passes
-		if the number of “Approve” ballots exceeds the number of “Reject” ballots.
+	* if 15% or fewer participate,
+		and the number of “Approve” ballots exceeds three times (3x) the number of “Reject” ballots,
+		the vote passes.
+	* if more than 15% but fewer than 20% participate,
+		and the number of “Approve” ballots exceeds twice (2x) the number of “Reject” ballots,
+		the vote passes.
+	* if 20% or more participate,
+		and the number of “Approve” ballots exceeds the number of “Reject” ballots,
+		the vote passes.
 
 	Otherwise, the proposal is rejected.