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Cargo.toml

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 members = ["core", "net", "p2p", "jsonrpc"]
 
 [workspace.package]
-description = "An infrastructure for peer-to-peer, decentralized, and collaborative software."
+description = "A library for building p2p, decentralized, and collaborative software"
 version = "0.1.1"
 edition = "2021"
 homepage = "https://karyontech.net"

README.md

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 # Karyon
 
- An infrastructure for peer-to-peer, decentralized, and collaborative software
+A library for building p2p, decentralized, and collaborative software
 
 [Website](https://karyontech.net/) | [Discord](https://discord.gg/xuXRcrkz3p) | [irc](https://libera.chat/) #karyon on liberachat 
 
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 ## Overview
 
-Many developers around the world aspire to build peer-to-peer, decentralized
-apps that are resilient, secure, and free from central control.
-However, there are still not many libraries and tools available to build these
-kinds of apps. This forces many developers to either abandon their ideas or
-develop a new p2p network stack and tools from scratch. Such efforts are not
-only time-consuming but also prone to errors and security vulnerabilities, as
-each new implementation reintroduces potential weaknesses.
-
-Karyon provides developers with the components and tools needed to create p2p
-and decentralized apps and simplifies the complexities associated with building
-them. Its primary goal is to make decentralization more accessible and
-efficient for developers everywhere.
+Building peer-to-peer (p2p), decentralized applications that are resilient,
+secure, and free from central control is a challenge for developers. There are
+not many libraries and tools available to build these applications. As
+a result, many developers either abandon their ideas or have to develop a new
+p2p network stack and tools from scratch. Instead of sharing common components
+and tools for building p2p systems, every p2p project seems to reinvent the
+wheel, which increases the effort required and the potential for vulnerabilities.
+
+Karyon addresses this issue by providing developers with the components and
+tools needed to create p2p and decentralized apps, simplifying the complexities
+associated with building them. its primary goal is to make decentralization
+more accessible and efficient for developers everywhere.
 
 ## Crates 
 

p2p/README.md

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 > Despite criticisms of Kademlia's vulnerabilities, particularly concerning
 > Sybil and Eclipse attacks [[1]](https://eprint.iacr.org/2018/236.pdf)
 > [[2]](https://arxiv.org/abs/1908.10141), we chose to use Kademlia because our
-> main goal is to build an infrastructure focused on sharing data. This choice
+> main goal is to build a network focused on sharing data. This choice
 > may also assist us in supporting sharding in the future. However, we have made
 > efforts to mitigate most of its vulnerabilities. Several projects, including
 > BitTorrent, Ethereum, IPFS, and Storj, still rely on Kademlia.