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 The analysis pipeline of the demonstrator incorporates a comprehensive suite of tools and libraries.
 These include uproot for data reading, awkward-array for data manipulation, Dask for parallel computing, and hist for histogram processing.
 For the purpose of statistical analysis, the pipeline integrates cabinetry and pyhf, providing a robust toolkit for analysis.
-.bold[A significant component of this project is the custom application of corrections, scale factors, and systematic errors using ATLAS software.
-The infrastructure and methodology for these applications will be discussed in detail during the presentation, underscoring the adaptability of the Python ecosystem for high-energy physics analysis.]
+A significant component of this project is the custom application of corrections, scale factors, and systematic errors using ATLAS software.
+The infrastructure and methodology for these applications will be discussed in detail during the presentation, underscoring the adaptability of the Python ecosystem for high-energy physics analysis.
 
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 # Challenges for Future Analysis
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 # An Analysis Grand Challenge
 
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-HL-LHC era data scale requires rethinking how we engage with the data when we preform analysis
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+HL-LHC era data scale requires rethinking interacting with data during analysis
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 * .bold[Analysis Grand Challenge] (AGC) community exercise organized by [IRIS-HEP](https://iris-hep.org/) includes the stages of a projected typical HL-LHC analysis
-* Binned columnar analysis, reinterpretation [fix]
-* Development of the required cyberinfrastructure [fix]
-* Opportunity for ATLAS to demonstrate how a columnar analysis view and areas for improvement
-   - Accessing PHYSLITE, systematics
+* Demonstrator of development of the required cyberinfrastructure
+   - [The 200Gbps Challenge: Imagining HL-LHC analysis facilities](https://indico.cern.ch/event/1338689/contributions/6009824/) (Alexander Held, Monday plenary)
+* Opportunity for ATLAS to demonstrate columnar analysis views and areas for improvement
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 <p style="text-align:center;">
    <a href="https://iris-hep.org/grand-challenges.html#analysis-grand-challenge">
       <img src="https://iris-hep.org/assets/images/cabinetry-vertical-slice.png"; width=100%>
    </a>
 </p>
 
-.caption[[High level view of operations in an HL-LHC analysis](https://iris-hep.org/grand-challenges.html#analysis-grand-challenge)]
+.center.large[[High level view of operations in an HL-LHC analysis](https://iris-hep.org/grand-challenges.html#analysis-grand-challenge)]
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