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better first lines for properties with multiple characterizations #1088
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The suggestions seem ambiguous. It used to be: Any of the following equivalent conditions: A, B, C, D. Now: A, or any of the following equivalent conditions: B, C, D. |
Compare with https://topology.pi-base.org/properties/P000135, which is more carefully worded. |
I'll reiterate my comment from pi-base/web#177 (comment):
But I'll go along with this PR. |
Excluding the 'Any of the following equivalent properties holds:' examples, I think the following are all of properties with three or more definitions which contain "equivalent*", sorted by the way they're currently styled. Maybe we could decide on our favorite? I think we could change "Equivalently, any of the following equivalent properties holds:" to "This is equivalent to each of the following:".
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Yeah, that reads much better, and is also correct. |
I don't mind doing the tedious work of switching these all to one style. Probably not for a few days. |
Hmm, what do you have in mind exactly? I think it's fine to change the introductory sentence when there is a list of bullet points. But in my opinion, we may not want/need to convert everything to bullet points. I agree with splitting the paragraph for P15 (your category 4). |
Maybe going forward we could agree on a favored style for new properties? I don't see why to prefer the separate paragraph style, because then following paragraphs aren't as easily distinguishable from equivalent definitions. |
We'll have to play it by ear. I vaguely remember there were some cases of definitions involving multiple paragraphs, followed by some equivalent other characterizations in still other paragraphs. Forcing a bunch of paragraphs to be scrunched together in a single bullet does not seem optimal. But overall, to me it does not seem very important if we don't have a uniform style for this. The main thing is to have something clear and unambiguous. And I am ok with having the first line more descriptive of the property, if some people care about that. Also note: for just two definitions, there is no sense in using bullets. |
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Sorry Steven. Afterwards I realized this would have been the ideal place to test out the 'suggestion' feature. I'll do it next time!
Closes #1086