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-# Energy Consumption and Carbon Offset
+# Minimizing Our Carbon Footprint
 
-## Relocating to a Greener Data Center
+In the relentless march of blockchain technology, we've chosen a path less
+trodden. Our commitment isn't just to innovation, but to the delicate balance
+between progress and planetary health.
 
-We are committed to reducing our carbon footprint, and as part of that journey,
-we have relocated to a new data center at STT. This move is crucial to aligning
-with our environmental goals, as the STT data center is on track to achieve full
-carbon neutrality by 2030. The facility is already implementing 100% carbon
-offsetting measures, making it an essential step in our decarbonization strategy.
+## Polkadot
 
-### Current Energy Consumption
+We've anchored our on-chain operations to the Polkadot network. It's not merely
+a blockchain; it's a testament to what's possible when brilliant minds converge
+on the problem of sustainable computation. Polkadot doesn't just process
+transactions—it redefines the very notion of blockchain efficiency.
 
-Our current infrastructure consumes **595.1 kWh per month** per rack, reflecting
-the continuous optimization of power usage.
+## The Migration to Conscious Computing
 
-* **Monthly CO2e Emission Estimate:**
-  * Thailand's 2021 CO2 emission factor: **0.563 kg CO2e/kWh**
-  * Monthly emissions: `595.1 kWh * 0.563 kg CO2e/kWh = 335 kg CO2e` or
-  **0.335 metric tons (mt) CO2e** per month.
+Our servers have found a new home in STT's cutting-edge data center. It's more
+than a facility; it's a bold statement against the status quo of energy-hungry
+tech. By 2030, it aims to erase its carbon footprint entirely. Today, it already
+neutralizes 100% of its emissions—a rare beacon of responsibility in our industry.
 
-By relocating to STT's greener facility and leveraging their renewable energy
-and offset programs, we are significantly reducing our carbon emissions, making
-our operations more eco-friendly and sustainable.
+### The Numbers Don't Lie
 
-## Carbon Offset Strategy
+Our current rack sip a mere 595.1 kWh monthly. In Thailand's energy landscape,
+that translates to 335 kg of CO2 equivalent. It's a number we're not satisfied
+with, but one we're actively working to drive down to zero.
 
-In line with our sustainability commitments, we previously offset our carbon
-emissions through Renewable Energy Certificates (RECs) via TerraPass. With the
-relocation to the STT data center, we are now focusing more on reducing the
-emissions directly, while still engaging in over-offsetting strategies to cover
-any residual emissions.
+## The Road Ahead
 
-## Conclusion
+Our journey with STT and Polkadot isn't just about ticking boxes or greenwashing
+our image. It's a fundamental shift in how we view the relationship between
+technology and our planet. We're not waiting for regulations or market
+pressures—we're driving change from within.
 
-The transition to the STT data center marks a new chapter in our sustainability
-efforts, combining energy-efficient infrastructure with a comprehensive
-offsetting plan. By continually optimizing our energy consumption and utilizing
-greener facilities, we are advancing towards our goal of a carbon-neutral future.
-
-!![First TerraPass certificate](./images/carbon/terrapass-voucher.webp)
+![First TerraPass certificate](./images/carbon/terrapass-voucher.webp)