apogee review

shiptest-ss13 · Oct 21, 2024 · 8c82536 · 8c82536
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diff --git a/code/modules/cargo/packs/gun.dm b/code/modules/cargo/packs/gun.dm
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 
 /datum/supply_pack/gun/m17
 	name = "M17 pistol Crate"
-	desc = "An cheap target shooting pistol manufactured by Serene Interstellar. Chambered in .22lr"
+	desc = "A cheap target shooting pistol manufactured by Serene Interstellar. Chambered in .22lr"
 	cost = 200
 	contains = list(/obj/item/storage/pistolcase/m17)
 	crate_name = "pistol crate"
@@ -173,14 +173,14 @@
 
 /datum/supply_pack/gun/m12
 	name = "Sporter Rifle Crate"
-	desc = "Contains a recently manufactured Model 12 \"Sporter\", Serene Outdoor's premier small game rifle."
+	desc = "Contains a recently manufactured Model 12 \"Sporter\", Serene Outdoors' premier small game rifle."
 	contains = list(/obj/item/storage/guncase/m12)
 	cost = 500
 	crate_name = "rifle crate"
 
 /datum/supply_pack/gun/m15
 	name = "Super Sporter Rifle Crate"
-	desc = "Contains a recently manufactured Model 15 \"Super Sporter\", Serene Outdoor's premier big game rifle."
+	desc = "Contains a recently manufactured Model 15 \"Super Sporter\", Serene Outdoors' premier hunting rifle."
 	contains = list(/obj/item/storage/guncase/m15)
 	cost = 2500
 	crate_name = "rifle crate"

diff --git a/code/modules/projectiles/guns/manufacturer/serene_sporting/ballistics.dm b/code/modules/projectiles/guns/manufacturer/serene_sporting/ballistics.dm
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ EMPTY_GUN_HELPER(automatic/pistol/m17)
 
 /obj/item/ammo_box/magazine/m17
 	name = "Model 17 magazine (.22lr)"
-	desc = "A 10-round, magazine for the Model 17 \"Micro Target\". These rounds do okay damage with awful performance against armor."
+	desc = "A 10-round magazine for the Model 17 \"Micro Target\". These rounds do okay damage with awful performance against armor."
 	icon_state = "m17_mag-1"
 	base_icon_state = "m17_mag"
 	ammo_type = /obj/item/ammo_casing/c22lr
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ EMPTY_GUN_HELPER(automatic/m12_sporter)
 
 /obj/item/ammo_box/magazine/m12_sporter
 	name = "Model 12 magazine (.22lr)"
-	desc = "A 25-round, magazine for the Model 12 \"Sporter\". These rounds do okay damage with awful performance against armor."
+	desc = "A 25-round magazine for the Model 12 \"Sporter\". These rounds do okay damage with awful performance against armor."
 	icon_state = "m12_mag-1"
 	base_icon_state = "m12_mag"
 	ammo_type = /obj/item/ammo_casing/c22lr
@@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ EMPTY_GUN_HELPER(automatic/m15)
 
 /obj/item/ammo_box/magazine/m15
 	name = "Model 15 magazine (5.56x42mm CLIP)"
-	desc = "A 20-round, magazine for the Model 15 \"Super Sporter\". These rounds do average damage and perform moderately against armor."
+	desc = "A 20-round magazine for the Model 15 \"Super Sporter\". These rounds do average damage and perform moderately against armor."
 	icon_state = "p16_mag-1"
 	base_icon_state = "p16_mag"
 	ammo_type = /obj/item/ammo_casing/a556_42