Revise getting-started page #139
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I went in to fix a couple sentences and ended up rewriting quite a lot for accuracy and clarity. This was informed by onboarding new people at dweb camp and observing what they were confused about and where they got stuck.
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Seems like a good update on the text. |
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I love all of these changes. The information is more up to date, and is succinct and correct as far as I understand these things. But the tone is such a strong improvement, there's a directness and kindness to this that I appreciate-- it's inviting and clear without using any condescending examples. I also like the small mentions of cultural styles (e.g. that a reply may arrive soon, or like a letter in a few days), and the honest discussion of safety and privacy.
the only thing I'd want to add is tea recommendations on line 146. this is not crucial though, and can always be added later.
i love it!
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I went in to fix a couple sentences and ended up rewriting quite a lot for accuracy and clarity.
This was informed by onboarding new people at Dweb Camp and observing what they were confused about and where they got stuck.
I don't know how to deploy this to scuttlebutt.nz after it's merged -- is that automatic?