feat(video): My NEW Ultimate Desk & Setup Tour 2023

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 Thanks to Grovemade for helping me organize my desk!  Use code `TECHNOTIM` for 10% off! <https://l.technotim.live/grovemade>
 
-Huge shoutout to Elgato for helping me get my stream in check! <https://www.elgato.com>
+Huge shout out to Elgato for helping me get my stream in check! <https://www.elgato.com>
 
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 📺 [Watch Video](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gYgaxdUAAS0)
 
 ## Notes
 
-Here are my notes from the video in case you wanted a little more context than I was able to provide!  This was such a fun project but yet I am glad I am done!  Let me know if you have any questions in the comments below!  All parts are linked in the `Where to Buy Section` below!
+Here are my notes from the video in case you wanted a little more context than I was able to provide in the video!  This was such a fun project but yet I am glad I am done!  Let me know if you have any questions in the comments below!  All parts are linked in the `Where to Buy Section` below!
 
 ## Monitors
 
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 ### Samsung Odyssey Neo G9 57” Dual 4k UHD
 
 - Dual 4k means they put 2 4k panels together
-- 240hz refresh rate and 1ms response time
-- I don’t need this at all, 120hz is great but what I really wanted was a specific ratio.
+- 240Hz refresh rate and 1ms response time
+- I don’t need this at all, 120Hz is great but what I really wanted was a specific ratio.
 - Ratio is Important to me because I wanted to have a 16:9 ratio so that I could put 2 windows side by side and have them each be 4k, or one large one for editing
-- One other cool thing is that it has a 100R curve, which for me I think is one of the best curves, although  I haven’t used any other. This makes it feel more natural where the monitor is almost equidistant as I move my head when looking left and right.
+- One other cool thing is that it has a 1000R curve, which for me I think is one of the best curves, although  I haven’t used any other. This makes it feel more natural where the monitor is almost equidistant as I move my head when looking left and right.
 - So how do you hold up a 40 lbs monitor?  Very carefully.  
 - Took a while to find the right arm, since most monitor arms max out at about 30-40 lbs.  Ended up finding one that supports 44 lbs and it’s working great.
 - I did this so I can adjust and and because the legs are gigantic
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 - Behind me is my workbench
 - This is where I build and test most of the things you see on my channel
-- You can see a ZimaBoard and zima blade here that I am testing and working on
-- As you can see I also have the Grove desk shelf
-- Lots of little things hiding in here
-- This area is where I charge things
+- You can see a ZimaBoard and ZimaBlade here that I am testing and working on
+- As you can see I also have the Grovemade desk shelf
+- I can hide lots of things in the shelf
+- I use this primarily for charging
 - Wish there were a better way to to charge all usb devices, but tucking them under here is the best I’ve found. If you know of a better way let me know in the comments!
 
 ## Where to Buy