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Add EL9 to "register host without Puppet" #3284

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Expand Up @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ By default, the bootstrap script configures the host for content management and
If you have an existing configuration management system and do not want to install Puppet on the host, use `--skip-puppet`.

.Procedure
* On {EL} 8, enter the following command:
* On {EL} 9 or 8, enter the following command:
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Is there a stylistic reason for using "9 or 8" instead of "8 or 9"?

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We tend to list versions from latest to oldest and try to keep it consistent.

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Why do you list from latest to oldest?

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ISG does not provide a specific guideline about version order but they list versions from earlier to later in their examples. See References to multiple releases.

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* On {EL} 9 or 8, enter the following command:
* Enter the following command according to your operating system:
** {EL} 8 or 9:

I recommend you turn this into a single step with 2 bullet points because a procedure with 2 bullets looks like an error.

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[options="nowrap", subs="+quotes,verbatim,attributes"]
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--activationkey="_My_Activation_Key_" \
--skip-puppet
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* On {EL} 6 or 7, enter the following command:
* On {EL} 7 or 6, enter the following command:
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* On {EL} 7 or 6, enter the following command:
** {EL} 6 or 7:

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[options="nowrap", subs="+quotes,verbatim,attributes"]
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