README clarifications

README.md

@@ -17,14 +17,14 @@ See below for specific examples of using the various packages.
 ### ./diff: Kubernetes Object Comparator
 
 The utilities in this package are intended to be in used in the context of custom Kubernetes controllers, 
-when comparing the live state of a Kubernetes object (fetched via API) with its desired state (constructed
+when comparing the live state of a Kubernetes object (fetched via API) against a desired state (constructed
 via code).  The "live" object, fetched from Kubernetes, will auto-generate many fields that we won't
 or can't specify in the "desired" object that we construct.  A common job of a Kubernetes controller is to 
 compare a desired and live object, and `Apply()` changes if they are different.  But we don't want these 
-auto-generated fields to cause us to apply changes.  A standard Golang struct comparison _will_ detect these 
-as differences, and is therefore insufficient for our purposes here.
+auto-generated fields to cause us to apply changes, otherwise we'd be doing so frequently.  A standard Golang 
+struct comparison _will_ detect these as differences, and is therefore insufficient for our purposes here.
 
-Our `Diff()` function simply performs a recursive struct comparison that ignores any fields that were unspecified 
+Our `Diff()` function simply performs a recursive struct comparison, but ignores any fields that were unspecified 
 in the `toObject` (the desired object):
 
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