Good #1730
Good #1730
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Thank you for your hard work on this submission! 😊 While your code meets many of the task requirements, there are a few critical issues that need to be addressed before we can approve it:
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Logical Error in
sell_productMethod: In theCinemaBarclass, thesell_productmethod should use theproductparameter directly instead of overwriting it withcustomer.food. This change is crucial to ensure the correct product is sold. -
Type Mismatch in
movie_sessionMethod: TheCinemaHallclass'smovie_sessionmethod should accept a list ofCustomerinstances, not a single instance. This adjustment is necessary for the method to handle multiple customers properly. -
Redundant Loop in
cinema_visitFunction: The creation ofCustomer,Cleaner, andCinemaHallinstances should occur outside of any loops to avoid unnecessary repetition and inefficiency. -
Incorrect Return Type in
CleanerClass: The__init__andclean_hallmethods should not have return type annotations, or should returnNonerespectively, as they do not return any value.
Please address these issues to ensure your code functions as intended and meets the task requirements. Keep up the great work, and don't hesitate to reach out if you need further assistance! 🚀
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| def sell_product(product: str, customer: Customer) -> None: | ||
| product = customer.food |
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The sell_product method should use the product parameter directly instead of overwriting it with customer.food. This ensures that the method sells the product specified by the caller, not just the food associated with the customer.
| def movie_session( | ||
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| movie_name: str, | ||
| customers: Customer, |
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The customers parameter should be a list of Customer instances, not a single Customer instance. Update the type hint to list[Customer] to reflect this.
| for i in range(len(customers)): | ||
| customer_instance = [Customer(c["name"], c["food"]) for c in customers] | ||
| cleaner_instance = Cleaner(cleaner) | ||
| hall = CinemaHall(hall_number) |
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There is an unnecessary loop when creating instances of Customer, Cleaner, and CinemaHall. The loop should be removed, and the instances should be created outside of the loop. This will ensure that the instances are created only once, not repeatedly.
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| for i in range(len(customers)): | ||
| customer_instance = [Customer(c["name"], c["food"]) for c in customers] |
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The customer_instance should be created outside of the loop. The list comprehension is correct, but it should not be inside a loop. Move it outside the loop to create the list of Customer instances once.
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| class Cleaner: | ||
| def __init__(self, name: str) -> Cleaner: |
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The __init__ method should not have a return type annotation. Constructors in Python do not return a value, so the -> Cleaner annotation should be removed.
| def __init__(self, name: str) -> Cleaner: | ||
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| def clean_hall(self, hall_number: int) -> Cleaner: |
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The clean_hall method should have a return type of None instead of Cleaner. Update the return type annotation to -> None.
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Thank you for your submission! 🎉 While your code has made some progress, there are a few critical issues that need attention to fully meet the task requirements:
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Logical Error in
sell_productMethod: In theCinemaBarclass, ensure that thesell_productmethod uses theproductparameter directly instead of assigningproduct = customer.food. This will ensure the correct product is sold. -
Type Mismatch in
movie_sessionMethod: TheCinemaHallclass'smovie_sessionmethod should accept a list ofCustomerinstances, not a single instance. Update the parameter toList[Customer]and importListfromtyping. -
Redundant Loop in
cinema_visitFunction: Move the creation ofCustomer,Cleaner, andCinemaHallinstances outside of any loops to avoid unnecessary repetition and improve efficiency. -
Incorrect Return Type in
CleanerClass: The__init__andclean_hallmethods should not have return type annotations or should be-> None, as they do not return any value.
These issues are important for the functionality and efficiency of your code. Please review the comments and address these points to improve your solution. Remember, addressing these issues will help you avoid similar problems in the future and enhance your coding skills. Keep up the good work and continue learning from your experiences! 😊
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| def sell_product(product: str, customer: Customer) -> None: | ||
| product = customer.food |
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The line product = customer.food is incorrect. You should use the product parameter directly instead of overwriting it with customer.food. This will ensure the correct product is sold as intended.
| def movie_session( | ||
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| movie_name: str, | ||
| customers: Customer, |
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The customers parameter should be a list of Customer instances, not a single Customer. Change the type annotation to List[Customer] and ensure you import List from typing.
| for i in range(len(customers)): | ||
| customer_instance = [Customer(c["name"], c["food"]) for c in customers] | ||
| cleaner_instance = Cleaner(cleaner) | ||
| hall = CinemaHall(hall_number) |
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The creation of customer_instance, cleaner_instance, and hall should be moved outside of the loop. Currently, these instances are being recreated in each iteration, which is inefficient and unnecessary.
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| def __init__(self, name: str) -> Cleaner: |
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The __init__ method should not have a return type annotation or should be -> None, as it does not return any value.
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| def clean_hall(self, hall_number: int) -> Cleaner: |
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The clean_hall method should not have a return type annotation or should be -> None, as it does not return any value.
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